Saturday, July 13, 2013

Maximus Seven: Slamming Doors

I just got the call that I am going to be needed as a movie extra this weekend. Words cannot express my excitement, and I can't wait to tell Soleil. I don't want to tell her over a text message, so I go over to her dorm even though I'm not sure if she is out of class yet. I finally got a car, it's kind of small and quite the clunker appearance wise, but it runs well, which was what I needed. I figure later on I can get a better car.


I park in Soleil's driveway and walk in the front door, deciding to play some pool. As soon as I set up the pool balls and break them, the front door opens. I look up, hoping it's Soleil, but it's not and I'm slightly disappointed.


What walked in the door isn't unpleasant, however, as it is a blonde girl with a smoking hot figure. I keep playing pool and waiting for Soleil, when someone taps me on the shoulder. I turn around to see the blonde girl standing in front of me.


"Eh, excusez-moi? Em, excuse me? Can you help me?"

Wow, she's French? Her accent is really sexy and she has green eyes, similar to mine. I smile politely at her, and walk to the other side of the table so she's not so close to me.


"What is it that you need help with?"

Unfortunately, the blonde follows me and stands near me again. I'm not sure why she keeps doing that other than she's trying to flirt with me or something.

"I am new here at the university, and I was wondering if you could tell me where the financial loan office is? I have to get some of my loans confirmed. Also, maybe it would be tres bien to walk there with someone as handsome as you, no?"

I walk away from her, backing into the pool table. The blonde comes up very close to me, and I notice her perfume. I am uncomfortable with her invading my personal space, and very unhappy that she is touching my chest.


"Um no, I don't actually know where the office is because I don't go to school here. I'm just dating a girl who is."

"Oh, you have a girlfriend? Pardonnez-moi. I'm em, sorreee."

I smile at the blonde, and let her know it's okay that she flirted with me because she didn't know I had a girlfriend.


"Em, do you know, ou est, em, where I can find someone who will know?"

"Oh yeah, there are some other people who actually live here, my sister, she has long brown hair, and blue eyes. I don't know if she's here, but good luck finding her."

The blonde smiles at me, and I smile back before going back to my pool game. She taps me on the shoulder again.


"Em, desole, je m'appelle Noelle. My name. What is yours?"

"I'm Max. Nice to meet you."

"Enchante, Max. Em, merci. Thank you."

"You're welcome."


Suddenly I see Helena in the corner of my eye. Noelle goes over to her, but Helena just yells at the poor girl and walks away. Noelle storms off out the front door, and slams it shut.


I'm annoyed now because Helena is such a bitch. I have no idea what her problem is other than she needs to get laid. The stick up her ass she's had her whole life is still there, and apparently it has gotten much longer and much more anal. I debate yelling at her, but decide that maybe I should just give her the silent treatment. I'm not her father, but I always feel like I am the one to knock sense into her head when she acts like an idiot, and I'm tired of it. I was excited when I came over today, but now I'm not. She managed to ruin my day without even talking to me. I decide to leave and go home, Soleil wasn't here, and I don't want to be here if she's not. I leave the dorm, slamming the door behind me.


I see Max leave the house after that girl does. He's probably out there chasing her like the man whore he's always been. I can't believe he would do that to Soleil, especially after she told me how much she liked him in the car ride over here. I check the calendar on the wall where we've posted our class schedules, and see that Soleil will be back in about an hour. I have to tell her what I saw so she will be protected from further pain. It's better that she knows now than later, after she's been with the douche for a long time. I snicker as I think that's probably why he wanted to be an actor, to get time away from Soleil so he could kiss all the pretty girls at those trashy parties they always have. The front door opens and Soleil comes in. She doesn't say anything to me and makes a beeline for the bathroom. When she comes out, I make my move.


"Soleil, are you all right?"

"Yeah, I'm just feeling a little sick. It's nothing."

"I have to tell you something."

"Helena, why the hell are you looking at me all somber?"

"Max flirted with another girl today. He was here playing pool and this blonde girl came in. They were standing really close to each other and giggling."


"Whatever, Helena, I don't believe you."

"Soleil, he touched her arm and then he left with her."

"What? He left with her?"

"Yeah, shortly after she left, he quit playing pool and left as well."

Soleil looks at me sadly at first, then angrily, then her expression becomes blank. I've seen that look enough to know that's not a good thing because that means she's really angry.


"Helena, I can't deal with your bullshit right now, I'm going to go lay down."

"Soleil, just remember what I said, okay? He's always going to be a player, no matter how much you like him. I'm always looking out for you."

Soleil glares at me before slamming her bedroom door, and I don't know if anything I said sank in or not.



What the fuck is Helena trying to do to me? All the time? She's always like this. I thought Max got it into her stupid head that we're fine! Maybe he didn't get it into her head, or maybe she just forgot. I lean on the dresser and I can't stop the tears from coming down my face. Helena is such a bitch all the time. I am so emotional lately, and I haven't told anyone why. I lied to Helena, I know why I'm sick. I'm scared of how I'll juggle everything after the baby arrives.


I'm terrified of telling Max because I know it's his, and somehow I don't think that him finding out he has a child is going to go over very well. I know I want to keep it because I can't bear the thought of throwing away something that is a little part of Max. I'm pretty sure the feelings I have for him could be described as love, but I'm scared to tell him that. I know that he likes me a lot, but I don't know if he's ready for this, I know I'm not.


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41 comments:

  1. LE GASP! A babyyy!!! YAY! XD I can't wait to see what it looks like, omg. *screams*

    On a more serious note, now that I've freaked out a little..
    :( I hope Max doesn't get mad that she's pregnant, I'd like to think he wouldn't anyways, since he seems to love her as well, but idk. Hmm.
    *broods*
    *slaps Helena* Fuck off for once in your life. Ugh! Hahaha She always just assumes without ever finding out for herself and goes and runs off to ruin someone's day. *slaps again*

    Can't wait for the next chapter! >.<

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    1. Ugh. One of the hottest men in the world reproducing?! *dies* LOL I'm glad you're excited for baby.
      Hmm, I'll let you brood over Max's reaction so I don't spoil all your fun.
      LMAO Helena. *rolls eyes* Typical girl reaction. Always thinking it's the man's fault. *bitch slaps Helena* At this rate she's going to end up a crazy cat lady.

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  2. At least Soleil isn't just believing Helena without giving Max a chance to explain.

    And I had a funny feeling that something like this might happen after drunken sex. I have a feeling they know to use protection when their sober given how much they have sex, but drunk...

    And I have a very good feeling Max won't abandon Soleil just because she's pregnant with his child. So, Soleil, just TELL HIM! Once his initial shock at it goes away, you'll find out what his true feelings are for you and your situation! Don't let him find out through the grapevine or guessing on his own.

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    1. Yeah, Soleil knows how Helena is and she trusts Max, so that's just how they work. They've established their relationship in such a way that they don't just jump to conclusions when people try to tell them things about the other one. Drunk sex is never the wisest thing to do, LOL, because of things like this happening. Soleil's just scared as fuck right now, it's only been a few days since she found out that she is with child, lol, so she's trying to get over her initial shock. Not to mention her feeling sick, and over-emotional, and then Helena being her usual bitchy self, Soleil's overwhelmed today. She just needs to cry it out and relax a little before she can think clearly.

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    2. True, hormones can wreck havoc. Let's just hope Helena can keep her bitchy self to herself. Or get laid. Whichever :P

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    3. LOL!! Helena. Jeez. The saving myself for marriage business is not working out for her, hahaha!

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  3. whoa! the baby is serious is going to be super cute. If i was a girl and i saw that i would react too ladies.

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    1. Yeah, the baby is going to be cute. I'm excited.

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  4. *Squeals* Baby!!! Yes! Pumps fist! Ugh Helena, mind your own fricken business and go get laid will ya...seesh. Helena doesn't know the shit storm she could have caused by poking around in there business, Max didn't do a damn thing wrong. Love this chapter, as always, i'm hooked, can't wait till next chapter. Excited about the baby! Even though this baby is unexpected, you know Max will love the hell out of it. :)

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    1. Thanks. LOL. I'm excited to see this baby. Man it's gonna be hot. Hahhaa! *screams at Helena* She is so fucking infuriating. All the time. Like Soleil said, omg, all the time. I'm pretty hooked writing it at the moment, LOL. Soleil isn't going to assume the worst about Max, and she pretty much knows Helena speaks bullshit, so they'll be fine. But yeah Helena, what the hell, woman? Meddle much? Hahha!

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  5. OH MY GOD!!! I AM GOING TO KILL HER!

    do us me a favor and do NOT upload Helena to the exchange for any reason. I may be put in jail if you do :(

    She only sees exactly what she wants to see - and doesn't care to find out what is pay attention to what is actually fucking happening!! She can't stand that her brother and Soleil might ACTUALLY manage to be happy living life in a way she hasn't approved of - so she's sitting on the sidelines cackling like a fucking witch just waiting for one of them to fuck up so she can tear them apart!

    I'm so glad Soleil doesn't actually believe her, or at least she hasn't let it made her doubt Max yet. Seriously, if Max was going to hook up with another girl in any way, he wouldn't do it in the common room of Soleil's goddamn dorm. Give him some credit for a fucking brain at least!!!

    Ohmygod. *RAGE*
    ~anywhoo~
    Sorry for my language #^.^#.
    I can NOT wait to see the very first Maxamus baby! I'm sorry for Soleil that it is causing her so much stress. She needs to just tell Max, he'll support her. He'll always support her - because he's that kinda guy duh, and I'm really happy for their children - because I know they're both going to be absolutely fantastic parents. Their kids are going to be incredible!

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    1. Haha, it's okay for your language. Helena deserves someone to yell at her like that for her obnoxious behavior. Seriously, Helena is a dumbass, lol, you're right, she does only see what she wants. She somehow failed to see that Max kept walking away from Noelle...? *rolls eyes at Helena* That in itself should have been a fucking clue to her because before Soleil, Max would have totally gone for a girl like Noelle.
      Soleil will never doubt Max because of her strong feelings for him. It's not that she thinks he can do no wrong, it's that she trusts and loves him enough to always hear his side of the story.
      I'm excited for baby too! Soleil is just young and scared and this wasn't planned, so it kind of just hit her like a ton of bricks. She's over emotional at the moment, so she just needs to cry it out and relax for a little bit, and then she'll be able to think clearly.
      Thanks for reading and commenting! =D

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  6. Baby time, baby time...whoooo baby time!!!

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    1. LOL aww. I'm excited to see what a child from these two will look like. Eeee! Thank you for commenting.

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  7. I literally was screaming at Helena! Can I just jump through the computer an smack her?

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    1. Yes, yes you can. XD Jump through and do whatever you want to her. When I'm playing, and she yells at someone, I enjoy having them slap her after she yells at them. =D Thanks for commenting!

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  8. Helena is such a *******....I'm so excited to see the baby and how Max will react! Sorry for not commenting in forever, great chapter. =)

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    1. Hello lovely! It's good to see you comment again. =) Thanks for the compliments. Haha, you're in luck since I've got the baby up to a child already in the newer chapters! You don't have to wait long at all. ;) Omg, Helena is fucking stupid. LOL.

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  9. OH BERRY!!! HA!HA! I got the no protection bit right. Cute baby on the way!! Helena is a prize Jerk - she's got it all wrong and probably just caused a whole lot of unnecessary drama - Max went home - he better have!!!!
    runs off to next chapter to see what happens!!

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    1. LOL! You did get it right! =) Good job. Haha, oh yes, the baby is adorable. Don't worry, Max did just go home. He's a wonderful person. Helena is the queen of assuming before getting people's sides of the story, she'd make a good Hollywood reporter. She lives for the drama. *rolls eyes*
      Thanks for reading!

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  10. Oh just great. Helena is so insecure and she is quite the troublemaker, not matter what her intentions are, she should have either asked or kept her mouth shut... This is going to create a real mess because now Soleil's all emotional. :(

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    1. Helena is the typical girl, assume first, and never let anyone explain themselves. Soleil is over emotional because of the extra hormones going through her system right now. When Solleil gets her thoughts clear again, she'll be better.

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  11. Ugh, just Helena! She just assumes stuff without even asking about it first and goes off to ruin someone's day.

    Baby! :) I wonder how Max will take the news.

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    1. LOL, yup, you pretty much described Helena perfectly. Such a bitch! XD

      Eee, haha, you'll find out soon what Max thinks. :)

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  12. Communication people. Seriously! A lot of this drama could be avoided if Helena and Max learned to communicate! I'm glad tat Soleil didn't believe her this time. She needs Max more than anything now, but I'm worried that this baby has come way too soon.

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    1. You are right, Max could have stayed to talk to Helena, but he knew she was just going to yell at him and not listen, and he was way too angry to deal with her crap, so he just left. Helena... she enjoys just yelling at people like a ridiculous amount, not giving a care if they have something to say, she needs to calm her shit down, LOL.
      Soleil is smart enough and knows Helena well enough to know Helena's full of hot air most of the time. It sucked that her hormones are making her crazy and amplifying her fear and sadness. The baby definitely didn't come at a great time... not at all.

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  13. That was a case of bad timing. If only Max hadn't left right after the blonde, it wouldn't have looked so suspicious to Helena. Of course, Helena sees what she wants to see, too.

    Exciting that Soleil is pregnant with Max's baby! I'm sure Max will take the news well. As long as Soleil believes him that nothing happened with the blonde, I think they'll be OK. They trust each other.

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    1. You are correct on both counts, the bad timing and how Helena has selective vision. LOL. She only sees what she wants so she can justify her need to meddle in people's lives.

      Soleil is confused right now because she knows better than to trust Helena's words, but she's also still very fresh in her relationship with Max, so she doesn't know how he'll react to this level of life changing news.

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  14. Omg Helena stop assuming things lol I'm happy Soleil didn't believe her but oh my she's pregnant ...I don't think Max is ready for a baby just yet. Soleil and Max have a more physical relationship more than anything else...they can't keep their hands off of eachother but their communication might lack because of that but I hope not. Helena set Max up....I think she did because she was looking through the window when the french girl was pushing up on him. I can't believe she is pregnant and she drank that other night...she needs to really think about what she's going to do...its going to be hard to stay on college and look after a baby...and she's already lacking the motivation to even stay in school.

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    1. LOL! Here's that thing where you were worried Helena would try to break them up. XD
      You know what? Soleil and Max both aren't ready for babies. Soleil never even really thought about children, she was just having fun. Haha, well the first night Max came to see Soleil, he stayed and talked to her before they fell asleep, so they have no problems with communication. They have one of those rare relationships, where they can talk to each other, and they're both really attracted physically to each other. Helena's the only one with communication problems. LOL.

      Helena just happened to be there... :/ wrong place, wrong time. Hahaha. She was looking through the window, being nosy, looking for something to use as "evidence" to cause drama in Max and Soleil's relationship. *rolls eyes*

      LOL, well, you know how in the Sims they're only pregnant for 3 days or whatever, and they get pregnant pretty quick after you make them try for baby? Well, Soleil wasn't pregnant when she drank, their drunk sex was when she conceived. Soleil by herself, yes, it would be very difficult to stay in school and have a baby... but... we'll have to see if she has to do this by herself or not.

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  16. Three souls that suffer -- or four, if we want to include the French girl, who so easily flirts, to then be rejected by Max, and screamed at by Helena.

    Max is lonely, but instead of finding Soleil's company as he wished for, gets into a misunderstanding, and leaves all on his own, just angrier than before.

    Helena has all the wrong perceptions combined to the right intentions -- but right and wrong here is just my judgement. She wants to "protect" Soleil, and because she seems unable to trust Max, she jumps at denouncing him. She is said to be very religious, but I'm wondering what her religion is, and what are her principles.

    And poor Soleil. Words don't come easily for her. Not being able to say she loves her boyfriend, afraid that he will feel pressured by her feelings -- and by the baby. Those are lovely news, had the baby been wanted. But they are all so young, and a baby changes a whole life perspective. Becoming a mother without the aid of a partner, as Soleil foresees it, is very sad indeed.

    But I do have a good feeling about this. It will be a beautiful baby, coming from these two, and hopefully healthy. Max will accept and support Soleil -- he is a fine young man. Will he be shocked with the news? Will he be happy? Will Soleil tell him? Or shall Helena find it out and again gossip?

    I need to read more :)

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    1. This whole chapter was about a misunderstanding, and once again, Helena jumping to conclusions and blowing everything out of proportion.

      Max was excited when he came over because he wanted to tell Soleil his good news, and he gets really mad when Helena assumes things about him. He also felt bad for the French girl, Noelle, because she did nothing wrong, she made an innocent mistake.

      Well, Helena's a complicated character, her religion is fundamentalist Christian, which focuses a lot on rules, judgment, and being right and wrong. The main reason she is so displeased with Max and Soleil's relationship is because they are engaging in sex before marriage, which is a sin in Helena's eyes. There's also little things that anger her about their relationship that she feels is wrong, so she attacks. She also sees the world in black and white, which is the polar opposite of how Max and Soleil see the world.

      Soleil's still getting to know Max, and she's worried that their relationship is progressing too fast, not because she doesn't know of her feelings for him, but because a baby is a step that is a very giant one, one that lots of couples don't make till many years have passed in their relationship. She's worried that she'll lose him because he doesn't want what's happening. Of course, she's thinking about the worst case scenario in case that becomes her reality, sort of preparing herself, so that she doesn't have a breakdown if she does end up alone.

      Heehee, I like your good feelings about it. :D Yes, it definitely will be a very cute, adorable baby, and yes, perfectly healthy.

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  17. By the end of this chapter I was feeling so sad and upset for Soleil. Learning/knowing she has a baby on the way and not being able to share that news with the father or a friend, must be so hard. The poor girl. I hope Max doesn't get upset or angry or just plain freak out over the news. It's big news, but hopefully he thinks it's good news..? I'm happy about it anyway. haha
    Oh lawwd, Helena. Seriously. Chill out. hahaha omg I felt bad for that little French girl, being chased off by Helena. lol She has no shame. So quick to jump to conclusions, too. Not to mention the wrong ones.

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    1. Yeah, T_T Soleil is feeling a bit alone at the end of this chapter. She knew that telling Helena would open up a whole can of worms that she didn't need on top of her stress that she's already worried about. In a way, knowing how Helena would react did help Soleil avoid more heartache. However, now she has a decision to make whether to tell Max or not. They have good communication skills, so she has that going for her, but her fears are not entirely ridiculous because the news of a baby will test how true Max's feelings are for her.

      Haha, I don't think I take too long to reveal whether Soleil tells Max and how he reacts, so you'll probably find out soon enough. LOL, you're right to be happy about it, cause the baby will be adorable regardless, I mean, look at its parents, how could they go wrong? Heehee.

      Helena is so mean, especially to newcomers. She views everyone as a threat, and her "protection" that she thinks she is doing for Max and Soleil is just... stupid. LOL.

      Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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  18. Pink haired babies are the best kind lmao. I was just taking a wild guess, didn't think too much into it, but I guess Soleil really is pregnant :0 uh oh. What will Max think?

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    1. LOL, IKR? I was so hoping the baby would get Max's hair, when I was playing at this point in my game. XD Yeah, there was a definite possibility of it happening, even though it was a 50/50 shot, but I thought at this point in the legacy, since Max and Soleil's relationship was going well, that they needed to meet their first obstacle. Yes... Max's reaction is revealed in the next chapter. XD

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  19. UGH!!! Really Helena you and your meddling ways. WTF you just had to step in there and didn't even bother talking to Max first!!!!

    and yep knew she'd be pregnant

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    1. Yeah, she's such an asshole. Of course she wouldn't talk to Max first, that would require her to be a decent human... which she's proven that she is not. LOLL.

      Haha, yup, you had a 50/50 shot of guessing right, congratulations on being on the right side of the guess. XD I thought Max and Soleil needed an obstacle between them since they're doing so well as a couple. Besides, Helena, at this point in the legacy, has majorly, royally screwed up in this chapter, so story wise she kind of maxed out her obnoxiousness at the moment. LOL.

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  20. Helena was totally out of line here she thought the worst of Max and than ran off to tattle on him as soon as Soleil came home. She even had to check the class schedule to see how soon she could do that as she couldn't wait to tell Soleil.

    Soleil is sick? Me thinks she is preggers.

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    1. IKR? Helena... ugh. She just makes her life difficult, and then she makes everyone else's life difficult. She's just so rude. She thinks she's right about Max, and so her eagerness to check the schedule was her thinking she nipped the 'problem' in the bud. *rolls eyes at Helena*

      Yeah, Soleil's sick, so unless she ate some bad sushi or chicken, she very well could be preggers.

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